Felix's writing



 This week the class were asked to write a narrative based on their experiences with the Cavemen.  Felix usually finds writing a story difficult but this time with the promise of an A++ he produced the most amazing piece of writing with an incredible twist!  (Felix's own words)  It is challenging for Felix to write about a topic that is not about gaming but he has tried really hard this time and included the features of a narrative producing what is most definitely A++++ piece of work.  Amazing Felix, it really is a great story so far.

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