Assessment week this week: an example of writing from Inspire Class
Charlotte's recount of the cavemen visit
The Caveman Experience . As we plodded through the fields sprinkled with skulls, we were met with a lady, not just any lady, a lady who was dusted in dirt and grime, her clothes were ragged, like she had been in a fight with a ginormous grizzly bear, or something of that nature. She had long tangled hair with her feet on show, as she welcomed us into her towering tent, we were greeted by a man, by the name twig, he was all filthed up with loads of different aromas swarming around him. He then proceeded to show us around his perfectly painted tent, his tent was pasted with loads of ancient time paintings and had loads of stories to tell, like a librarian finally getting the chance to open up about her favorite book. As we continued into the tent, I noticed a rug, as I had a closer inspection, it was a bear mount, obviously she had won the fight. I was amazed how truly well spoken these people were. As the day continued, we had lots to do, we were able to make bracelets, brac...
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